(17)雅思屠鸭第十七天：小作文完整攻略

总体流程

1. 看图看题

2. 写开头段

开头段不需要花太多时间。快速搞定就好。

3. 分段

段落避免一长一短

4. 主题段落

动态图的句式

静态图的句式：

5. 总结段

练习

1. 动态图

题目1：

The bar chart shows average hours of housework done by women (unemployment, part time, full time) and full time working men.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

题目分析：

A 时态：一般过去时
B 描述对象和对比对象：不同情况的男女家务时间，年代
C 对象词： the hours of housework
D 分段：按照对象来分
E 总结：
女性比男性高，基本保持不变
没有工作的女性家务时间最长，其次是parttime女性，fulltime女性，最后是男性
女性都是下降，在上升，男性基本保持不变。

思路	句子
要点1：最高的women no employment, 基本保持不变	Unemployed women spent the highest amount of time doing housework, and the figure drpped to 6.3 hours in 1995, before rising to 7 hours in 2005.
要点2：第二高的women part-time, 下降上升	There was a similar trend in the figure for women who worked part-time, falling slightly to about 4.8 hours and then reaching 6 hours or so in 2005, and it was higher than the figurre for either women working full-time or men.
第二段中心句：有fulltime的人做家务的时间少很多	The time spent by people with full-time employment, either men or women, was much lower.
要点3：full-time女性，比较低，第一年和第三年基本一样，中间一年下降	The hours of housework for full-time women were similar in 1985 and 2005, at 2 hours or so, although it declined to 1.7 hours in 1995.
要点4：男性最低，轻微上升	The figure for men working full-time was the lowest, but it saw a steady increase to nearly 1 hour by the end of the period.
女性比男性高。基本上都保持不变。	Overrall, women, regardless of employment status, spent more time on housework than men. For all of them, the number of hours related to domestic duties did not experience significant changes over the same period.

七分+ 范文

The chart compares men and women in terms of the time they devoted to housework in three different years.

Women who unempolyed spent the longest time on domestic chores during the period, dropping to ever 6 hours in 1995 and then rising back to 7 hours in 2005. A similar trend was seen in the hours done by women who worked part-time, declining slightly to 5 hours in 1995 and then jumping to 6 hours in 2005.

On the other hand, men and women who had full-time employment were less involved in domestic work. Women in full-time employment, as shown in chart, spent around 2 hours on domestic task in the years 1985 and 2005, and even lower (just over one hour) in 1995. The hours commited by men were the lowest, although their involvement in housework increased steadily to just over 1 hour in 2005.

Overall, women, regardless of employment status, spent more time on housework than men. For all of them, the number of hours related to domestic duties did not experience significant changes over the same period.

题目2：
The charts show the retirement ages of men and women in seven countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A 时态：过去时
B 描述对象和对比对象：男人和女人，对比对象是国家
C 对象词：the retirement age of men or women
D 分段：按照图来分段
E 总结：所有国家的男女退休年龄基本增长，除了意大利。无论男女，Sweden，UK，Netherlands比其他国家都要迟退休。无论国家，男人都比女人高。

思路	句型
第一段第一要点：瑞典的男性退休年龄增长，而且最高	Men in Sweden had the highest retirement age, with the figure increasing from 63 to nearly 64.
第二要点：neitherlands和UK也增长，比较高	The figures for men in Neitherlands and the UK were also relatively high and showed a similar trend, reaching over 62.2 and around 61.8 respectively in 2008.
第三要点：其他国家数字比较低，都增长，除了意大利	Other countries had lower figures, and nearly all of them rose to some extent, while the figure for Italy remained unchanged at 58.
第二段第一要点：瑞典的女性退休年龄增长，而且最高	Women in Sweden also retired at an older age than their counterparts in other countries (62 in 2004 and 63 in 2008).
第二要点：neitherlands和UK也增长，比较高	Both Netherlands and the UK saw an increase in the retirement age of women, and both were also high.
第三要点：其他国家比较低，都增长，除了意大利下降	In contrast, the figures for Germany, Denmark and France were comparatively low, despite rising to 60, 58.2 and 58 respectively, while only Italy saw a fall to 56.
总结：所有国家的男女退休年龄基本增长，除了意大利。无论男女，Sweden，UK，Netherlands比其他国家都要迟退休。无论国家，男人都比女人高。	Overall, men and women in all these countries except Italy had to work longer lives, and regardless of gender, Sweden, the UK and Netherlands had higher retirement ages than other countries. For all these countries, men stayed in the workforce longer than women.

两段话分别描述两张图，最后总结说共性。

七分范文：

The chart show the differences between men and women in terms of when they retired in seven European countries.

Swedish men retired at an older age than their counterparts in other European countries in both years(at around 63 and 64 repectively), while the figures for Netherland and UK were lower. The retirement age of man in Germany and Denmark also increased, although to a lesser extent, reaching 61 and 60 in 2008. In contrast, men in France and Italy retired before the age of 60.

Women in these countries also saw an increase in the retirement age during this period, with the exception of Italy, where the retirement age declined to 56. Sweden, the UK and Netherlands had higher figures, and in these countries, women retired after the age of 60. The working lives of women in Germany, Denmark and France were shorter, despite the increase.

Overall, both men and women in most of these European countries retired at an older age during this period, while Italy was a notable exception to this trend. In general, men had a longer working life than women.

2. 静态图

The chart show the different forms of language training for employees of a company and the reasons they gave for learning a foreign language

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

A 时态：一般过去时（题目有一个gave）
B 描述对象和对比对象：第一段5种不同的原因，第二段5个不同的学习方法
C 对象词：学外语是为了出国旅行的人的百分比
D 分段：两个图描述的对象不一样，每个图各写一段
E 总结：学外语为了个人的百分比比为了工作的百分比要高，上课的人比自学的人高的多

思路	句型
主体部分第一段：第一要点：Holiday travel是最主要的原因。	最高级
第二要点：13% 的人为了personal interest，而14% 的人为了meet people	while
第三要点：对比而言，用于工作原因的学习比较低（18% 是出差，10% 是和客户交流）	比较级
主体部分第二段晚上上兼职课的人最高，然后是办公时间上课的人	分词
12%的人参加intensive course，而distance learning有5%	Compared with
总结：学外语为了个人的百分比比为了工作的百分比要高，上课的人比自学的人高的多	比较级

7分范例：

开头

The pie charts provides information about the proportion of people who learned a foreign language for different purposes and the proportion of people who chose different methods of acquiring a foreign language.

interestingly, up to 45% of staff learned a foreign language simply to overcome language barriers on holiday, compared to 18% of people who did this for business trips. Meeting people was the reason for 14% of employees, while communication with clients in other countries, another work-related factor, was chosen by 10%. The remainder picked up this language out of personal interests(13%).

Taking part-time courses in evening was the primary way for staff to under language training(38%), and 28% of people took part-time courses during working hours. 22% of staff chose to teach themselves a foreign language, whereas intensive training and distance learning combined(adj) represented 17%.

Overall, many employees learned a foreign language for personal reasons, and part-time course(in or out of work hours) were the preferred way of developing competency in a second language.