我写得信主要从个人感情出发。让人家一看就觉得很真诚，当然实际上也真的很真诚，没有什么违心的话。

我主要写了，生了宝宝后希望带她去看外面的世界增长见识什么的。而且我们家以前也常出国玩。可以看俺家最近出游的博客。虽然俺是一家庭妇女但俺们过滴不穷滴。

自信些，就过了。

Dear Sir or Madam:

From the web and TV, we have seen a lots of Australia magnificent scene introductions, especially Great Ocean Road, Tasmania, and Great Barrier Reef. They gave us very deep impression. That’s why we decided to go there in October 2010.

(先夸)

We love travel around the world very much, especially once we had our adorable baby. We brought her to look around natural scene and feel different cultures. We hope she can feel more about the nature to open her field of vision. So far, we have been to Thailand,Maldives，Malaysia, and Hong Kong by self-traveling. In that way, we can feel more details of local culture. You could find lots of our travel pictures at my family blog. This is one recently travel of Malaysia :

http://blog.sina.com.cn&×…………×……&￥&

(主打孩子感情路线)

(附上博客地址，估计我是首创吧。)

In our passports, we have visas of Japan, Malaysia, Thailand, Singapore, and Maldives and good records of arrival/departure in these countries. And I have the Japan business visa for 3 years.(摆事实)

We had our "little princess "in 2005. From that, my wife quit her job and became a housewife. We do enjoy our current happy life so much. My income including the earnings from the stocks can give my family a wonderful living. We will take all the relevant travel cost by ourselves. We have two properties and one car in Beijing,and it is most important that our relatives and friends are all live in Beijing. We guarantee that we will come back Beijing in time. Meanwhile, we will comply with all the Australia laws and rules. (表决心)

We have booked the round-way tickets to Australia at full price (budget tickets non refund)and reserved part of the hotels. Australia domestic tickets will be booked after getting visas. (特价票不退，这样不签，太说不过去了吧？)

We would really appreciate that having your approval of our travel visas.

Have a nice day.

Your sincerely:

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