语言表达的6c原则是指什么,第二讲 BEC写作的语言、语法、组织和文体
第二讲
BEC写作的语言、语法、组织和文体
评分标准:
级别
第一部分分数
第二部分分数
5
全部完成答题要求
l
所有内容点都已包括在内并在答题要求允许的情况下加以发挥
l
语言规范、自然;错误最少,均属小错。
l
多样化的语言结构和丰富的词汇量。
l
组织效果好,注意前后呼应。
l
语域和格式完全适当。
给读者的印象极佳。
9或10分
18或20分
4
较好的完成答题要求
l
所有内容点都处理得不错。
l
大体准确;运用复杂语言时有错误。
l
结构合理,用词准确。
l
大体上组织较好,注意逻辑关系。
l
语域和格式总体来说适当。
给读者的印象良好。
7或8分
14或16分
3
尚能达到答题要求
l
所有的主要内容点已包括进去,遗漏了一些次要的内容。
l
出现一些错误,但不妨碍交流。
l
结构和词汇掌握范围适度。
l
组织和安排总的来说令人满意。
l
语域和格式尚可,虽然并不完全成功。
给读者的印象较好。
5或6分
10或12分
2
不能完全达到答题要求
l
遗漏了一些主要的内容点或者处理得不充分,可能有些不切题。
l
有时错误影响清楚交流,错误较多,使读者感到迷惑。
l
结构、词汇掌握范围有限。
l
内容条理不清、不连贯,造成理解困难。
l
语域和格式不适当。
给读者的印象不佳。
3或4分
6或8分
1
未能达到答题要求
l
显著的内容遗漏/或大量内容不相关,可能由于对题目要求的误解。
l
严重不规范,经常出现基本错误。
l
题目要求的结构和词汇几乎没有提到。
l
缺乏组织,造成交流失败。
l
几乎没有使用适当的语域和格式。
给读者的印象极差。
1或2分
2或4分
0
什么要求也没达到。字数少于所需字数的25%,或是完全不能辨认或是完全不切题。
0分
0分
评分五个方面:
1 content
2 language
3 structure &
vocabulary
4 organisation
展开论述上面的5个方面
1 内容的完整性
2 语言
6C原则
1.准确(correctness)
包括四层意义,即阅读人能理解、接受的英语水平;使用精确措词,传达准确信息;正确地使用语法和标点符号;拼写正确。
(1)恰当的语言风格
请比较下面两组例词:
Formal
Informal
approximately
inquire
ascertain
obtain
assist
participate
construct
purchase
contribute
sufficient
difficult
utilize
About
Ask
find out
receive
help
share
build
buy
give
enough
hard
use
(2)准确的措词和信息
下面列出的是一系列极易混淆的单词及词组,请注意区分:
a lot /
allot
all right /
alright
cannot /
can not
different from / different
than
. due to / because
of
effect /
affect
fewer /
less
lie / lay
principal /
principle
that /which
their /
them / they' re
wait for / wait
on
who /
whom
(3)正确的语法和标点符号
(4)正确的拼写
2.清楚(Clarity)
(1)逻辑布局(Logical Organization)
常用的逻辑布局方法包括:
①因果关系(Cause & Effect)
②时间顺序(Chronological Development)
③序列顺序(Sequential Development)
④比较(Comparison)
⑤一般到特殊(From General to
Specific)
⑥特殊到一般(From Specific to General)
(2)合理构架句群与段落(Well-Written Sentences &
Paragraphs)
例句:
修改前: Marshall
Corporation was founded forty years ago, and it now has branch
offices in four states, and it employs nearly 400
individuals.
修改后: Marshall
Corporation was founded forty years ago. With branch offices in
four states, it now employs nearly 400
individuals.
(3)统一性与一致性(Unity and Coherence)
(4)强调(Emphasis)
①位置
②重复
③数量
④技巧
(5) 将句中关系紧密的词尽量靠近。
比较下面三对句子:
A. They bought a bicycle in
Beijing in a small shop which costs $ 25.00.
They bought a bicycle for
$25.00 in a small shop in Beijing.
B. He was warned not to
drink water even in a restaurant which had not been
boiled.
He was warned not to drink
water which had not been boiled.
C. Those who work rapidly
get ill in these conditions.
Those who work in these
conditions rapidly get ill.
(6)
避免在同一个句子中使用意义不同的同一个字。
We
shall take a firm line with the firm.
We
shall take a strong line with the film.
3.简洁(Conciseness)
A. We have begun to export
our machine to countries abroad.
We have
begun to export our machines.
B. In the event that you
speak to Mr. Wood in regard to production, ask him to
give consideration to the delivery
schedule.
If you
speak to Mr. Wood about production, ask him to consider the
delivery schedule.
C .We require furniture
which is of the new type.
We require
new-type furniture.
(1)
使用简洁的语言(Use simple
language)
尽量使用
避免使用
please will you be good enough to
prefer express a preference for
because for the reason that
(2) 少用陈词滥调(Omit trite
expressions)
as the case
may be
it has come
to my attention
at an early
age
avail yourself of this
opportunity
previous to
crack of
dawn
pursuant to your
request
take the liberty
to
due to the fact
that
thanking you in
advance
enclosed
herein
this is to inform
you
under separate
cover
with kindest
regards
I wish to
state
(3)
避免冗长的表达方式和不必要的重复(avoid
wordy expressions & unnecessary
repetition)。Wordy Concise
1. We would like
to please
2. For the month of
August for August
3. Pursuant to the end of this
week now
4. A long period of
time a long time
5. At this
time now
6. Is at this
time is
7. The weight was higher
than the weight was greater than
8. I expected it to
be expected
9. During the year of
1995 during 1995
10. For the development
of for developing
11. In the city of
Dallas in Dallas
12. The problem was that the car would
not the car would not start
start
13. Square in
shape square
14. in accordance with your
request you requested
15. Sign on the front of this
form sign this form
16. During the time
that while
17. Consensus of
opinion we agree
18. Remember the fact
that remember
19, Held a
meeting met
20. this is the situation at this
time now
(4)删改无关紧要的成份(Remove unneeded facts)
A. It should be noted that this is the best we can
do,
B. For
your information we enclose a catalogue.
C.
Please be advised that we have received your
invoice.
1. as soon
as
possible by July 10
2. as you
indicated in your
letter as you indicated
3. at all
times always
4. at this
time now
5. continue
to utilize the old form
until start using the new form on February
such time as the new form is
available
6. despite
the fact
that despite
7. for the
month of
April for April
8. for
obvious reason
that because
9. I would
ask that
you please
I0. in
conjunction
with with
11. in the
mere recent
past recently
12. in the
unlikely event
that if
13. in the
unlikely event that I am unable
to if I am late, please delay the meeting
be on time,
please delay the meeting
14. in view
of the fact
that because
15. it will
be greatly appreciated if
you please
16. our
production of the new product
will production will begin on July 1
commence on
July 1
17. please
be advised that we expect you
to please review the contract
review the
enclosed contract
(5)多使用主动语态的句子结构以明确表达意思。
Payment of their accounts will be made by Johnsons next
week.
Johnsons will pay their accounts next
week.
4.具体(Concreteness)
(1)
尽可能地提供明确、具体的信息。
A. These brakes can stop a
car within a short distance.
These
Goodson power brakes can stop a 2-ton car within 24
feet.
B. We hope the equipment
will be delivered to our company as soon as
possible.
Please
deliver the equipment to our company before next
Friday.
C. She is a fast
typist.
She types
at the fast rate of 85 words per minute.
(2) 使用具体词汇
A. We have no hesitation in
advising you…
We advise you…
B. The
preparation of new price scale is in hand.
New price scales are being prepared this week.
C. Due to
the unusual nature of the request,…
As the request is
unusual,…
a great
deal of time, bad, large, good, small, around, old, convenient,
young, little, majority, minority, most, less
5.完整(Completeness)
自查:谁(Who)?
什么(What)?
什么时候(When)?
在哪里(Where)?
为什么(Why)?
怎么样(How)?
6.礼貌(Courtesy)
例如:
Dear Mrs.
Walters,
Because you delayed so long
in your response, Model GSF is off stock. If you are interested, we
have some similar models on hand
Yours
truly,
修改:
Dear Mrs. Walters
If I had known your needs before May 20, I could have shipped Model
GSP immediately. However, the spring sale drained our
stock.
The Model GSK, a similar instrument, is in stock, and you could
have it at the same price as the GSF. It normally sells for $10,000
more. we will ship it as soon as you give us the
word.
Yours
sincerely
(1)
使用礼貌友好的词汇
A.
说“Thank you" ,
例如:
Thank you for your letter of
yesterday.
Thank you for your prompt
reply.
Thank you for helping us in
this respect.
Thank you for your
information.
(2)体谅对方的写作态度(You-Attitude)
Writer emphasis:
We are shipping your order on
Friday.
Reader
emphasis: You
will receive your order by Monday, October 10.
Writer emphasis:
To reduce our costs, we are
changing the billing system.
Reader
emphasis: To
provide you with clear records, we are changing our billing
system.
Writer
emphasis: I was pleased to hear that the project was
completed.
Reader
emphasis: Congratulations on successfully completing the
project
Writer
emphasis: We regret that you closed your account with us a week ago. We
believe that people may come back to our bank again sooner or later
since we have a good credit among our customers.
Reader
emphasis: A week ago you closed your account with us. Whatever the reason, we
are pleased to have played some small part in your program. You are
cordially invited to use our 'other services as occasion may
require.
(3) 措辞得体(Appropriate
Wording)
a.避免采用消极性的词汇或句式
Negative
Wording: The office is closed after four O'clock,
Positive
Wording: The office is open until four O'clock.
Negative
Wording: When I received your complaint, I checked our
records.
Positive
Wording: When I received your letter, I checked our
records.
Negative
Wording: Because you failed to connect the cable, the picture was
blurred.
Positive
Wording: The picture was blurred because the V-2 cable was not connected to
the terminal.
Negative
Wording: You did not read my recent letter.
Positive
Wording: Please refer to my June 10th letter.
Negative
Wording: The Executive Board did not receive notification.
Positive
Wording: Several members of the Executive Board inquired about the time of
our December meeting. Will you please send them a
follow-up?
Negative
Wording: Your letter was not clear.
Positive
Wording: I would appreciate an outline of our marketing differences that you
mentioned in your October 14th letter.
b.有失礼貌的言词
We deny your
claim complaint
We do not
believe confusion
We are not
sure contrary
We find it difficult to
understand contrivance
We
expect delinquent
We
insist deny
We are
forced disagreeable
We take issue exasperate
You
forgot failure
You
neglected ignorance
You failed
to impatience
You
misunderstood incompetent
You
must incredible
You should
know inexcusable
You do not
have inference
You are delinquent insincere
You insist
that insinuate
You did not
say insulting
Your
ignoring intolerable
Your credit
refusal irresponsible
Your recent
complaint irritated
Your failure
to lack
Your
misunderstanding neglect
Your neglectful
attitude objection
Your disregard
for obnoxious
Your
insinuation offensive
Your lack of
communication unbelievable
Your delinquent
account uncooperative
(4)避免使用有性别歧视之嫌的词语
A.用“person”代替第三人称单数。
例如:
Instead
of: Please share this report with your supervisor. He will find it
interesting.
Say: Please share this report with your supervisor, who will find it
interesting.
B.有一些常用的商务英语词汇有性别歧视之嫌,应该稍加改变。
Instead of
Say
Businessman
workmen
Chairman
Foremen
Salesman
Spokesman
Stockboy
Workman
business
person
employees/worker
chairperson
supervisors
sales
representative / sales person
spokesperson
stock
clerk
employee /
worker
(5) 及时答复(Timely
Response)
例:We will examine your
camera to determine the shutter-response problem and have it back
to you within three weeks, if repairs axe needed, I will call you
for approval to make the repairs.
例:Mr. Smith is out of
the office until the end of the month. I am sure he will be able to
provide you with all of the information you requested when he
returns.
连贯和衔接
(一)连贯 (coherence)
常见连接词有:
1表示罗列增加
First, second,
third,
First, then / next,
after that / next, finally
For one thing … for
another…,
On (the) one hand…on
the other hand,
Besides / what’s more
/ in addition / furthermore / moreover / another /
also,
Especially / In
particular,
2表示时间顺序
now, at present,
recently,
after, afterwards,
after that, after a while, in a few days,
at first, in the
beginning, to begin with,
later, next,
finally,
immediately, soon,
suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the
moment
form now on, from then
on,
at the same time,
meanwhile,
till, not…until,
before, after, when, while, as during,
3表示解释说明
now, in addition, for
example, for instance, in this case, moreover
furthermore, in fact,
actually
4表示转折关系
but, however, while,
though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the
other
hand, in contrast,
despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of
course, after all,
5表示并列关系
or, and, also, too,
not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither
…nor
6表示因果关系
because, because of,
since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result
(of), otherwise, so…that, such…that
7表示条件关系
as (so) long as, on
condition that, if, unless
8表示让步关系
though, although, as,
even if, even though, whether …or…, however,
whoever,
whatever, whichever,
wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when,
whom)
9表示举例
for example, for
instance, such as…, take… for example
10表示比较
be similar to,
similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like,
just as,
11表示目的
for this reason,, for
this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,
12表示强调
in deed, in fact,
surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt,
truly,
obviously, above
all,
13表示概括归纳
in a word, in short,
in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far
as I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown,
finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion,
(二)衔接 (cohesion)
1返指(referring back)
例:Davis opened a door.
“Here is your room. I am afraid it is a bit untidy.”
He picked a dirty handkerchief off the floor and
stuffed it in a drawer.
The keeper came loping
softly up the lane with the dog padding at his heels and we watched
them through the hedge as they went
by.
I held her
very close. My cheek was against
hers.
例:The women were asked
to leave. Some of them refused.
The earthquake killed 24,000
people and insured
77,000.
例:A man and a woman were
struggling up the dune. The man wore shorts.
The woman wore a print dress.
2预指(referring forward)
有多种方法可用来指代将要提及的事务。
例如:This chapter will follow the same pattern as the previous
one.
In the next
chapter, we will examine this theory in detail.
The overlap can be seen in
the table below.
3省略(Ellipsis)
例如:They can distinguish
finer detail than we can.
例如:They would stop if
they could.
I never did go to Stratford, although I probably
should have.
例如:I think we want it
more than they do.
例如:At last he agreed to
do what I asked him to.
文体:
非正式文体
Thanks for your letter. I got it 14 Sept. I’ve
sent a copy to comp HQ along with a memo re your financial
situation. I’ve set a meeting for 3 Oct at 11am to talk about
another bank loan. So, please let us know if you can make it
a.s.a.p.
But we might ask you a few things to do with
your inc. and exp. before giving you a loan. Also I need to get in
touch with the GM to okay it. Plus, we’ll first have to think about
the last time you didn’t keep p with payments.
Anyway, in the mean time, you need to fill in
this business plan. Bring it to the meeting with
you.
正式文体
Thank you for your letter received 14 September
2002. A copy has been sent to the company headquarters in addition
to a memorandum concerning your financial situation. A meeting has
been scheduled for 3 October 2002 at 11am to discuss your request
for a further bank loan. Therefore, please inform us of your
availability for this meeting at the earliest
opportunity.
However, a number of issues concerning your
income and expenditure may be queried prior to a loan being
granted. Furthermore the General Manager needs to be contacted in
order to authorise bank loans of this nature. Moreover, your
previous failure to meet payment arrangements will first have to be
considered.
Nevertheless, in the interim you are required to
complete the enclosed business plan, which should be brought to the
meeting.
e.g. I’m keen on British
history
I am particularly interested in British
history.
e.g. I’m sorry, I can’t come.
I regret to inform you that I will be unable to
attend.
关于选词,见活页。
关于文体,还应该注意:
从来不要用And引导一个句子。
不需要括号
不要缩写
不要引用
不要one-word
sentence.
不要使用口语谚语、不要使用比喻
不要使用修辞性的句子。
注意自己在题目中的身份
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