原标题：英语四级作文范文：科技与现代生活

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture. You should start your essay with a brief deion of the picture and comment on kids’ understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words.

【试题解析】

阅卷发现：很多同学写只写了“手机对学生的影响”，但其实不然。通过审题可以发现，如果只写“手机对学生的影响”则有跑题的嫌疑；因为本文体裁要求为“essay”，话题为“kids’ understanding of going to school”，即“孩子对上学的理解”。所以，本文应该写到“手机”，但如果未涉及“孩子对上学的理解”则有跑题的嫌疑。

建议各位准备四级考试的同学，对待任何作文的审题，都应该关注题干中的“名、动、形、副”四类词，只要围绕这四类词展开作文的写作，即可大大降低跑题的可能性。

【写作提纲】

首段：图画描述

二段：图画联系主旨+上学的意义+手机学习的不足

尾段：观点+建议

【参考范文】

This is a simple, funny but enlightening cartoon, in which a mother is sending her son to go to school. However, to her surprise, the youngster responds, “Why am I going to school if my phone knows everything?”

Evidently, this picture can be naturally associated with kids’ incorrect understanding of going to school. As a college student, I deem that it is of great necessity for any teenagers to enhance their comprehensive quality and competence by attending school. In the contemporary society, if youngsters intend to be talents, it is advisable for them to acquire not only knowledge, but also cooperation, diligence and communicative skills. However, today, it has become a trend for a host of students to gain diverse information through cell phones or computers. Meanwhile, a growing number of teenagers find it convenient and efficient to learn with the help of phones. But, it is also cell phones that lead many students to misunderstand or even ignore the essence of education. A case in point is the guy in the picture.

Do bear in mind: education does not merely mean “knowing everything”. Thus, parents and teachers should educate and encourage their kids to cultivate this awareness. (198 words)

【参考译文】

这是一幅简单、好玩但有启发性的图画。图画中，一个妈妈正要送自己的儿子去上学，然而使她意外的是，小孩回应道：“如果我手机什么都知道了，我为什么还要去上学？”

显然，这个图片能自然联系到孩子们对上学的不正确理解。作为一名大学生，我相信任何年轻人很有必要通过接受学校教育来提升自身的素质和能力。在当今社会，如果年轻人想要成为人才，他们应该获取知识，还应该获取合作、勤奋和沟通技能。然而，今天，很多学生从手机或计算机获取各种有用的信息，这已经成为一种趋势。同时，越来越多的青少年发现在手机的帮助下学习也变得方便高效。但是，也正是手机导致很多学生错误理解甚至忽视了教育的本质。一个典型例子就是图片中的男孩。

牢记：教育不简单意味着“知道一切”。因此，父母和老师应教育和鼓励他们的孩子培养这种意识。

科技类话题词汇

分享经济 sharing economy

共享汽车 car sharing

共享单车 bike/ bicycle sharing

扫码解锁单车 scan the QR code to unlock a bike

违规停车 illegal parking

停放点 parking lot/area

出境游 outbound trips/ oversea traveling

免税店 duty-free shop

海外购物 overseas shopping

移动支付 mobile payment

科技创新宝地 best place for science and innovation

高铁 high-speed train

动车 bullet train

假日购物季 holiday shopping season

收入分配 income distribution

市场经济market economy

人工智能 artificial intelligence,

过滤软件 filtering software

流氓软件 hooligan software

销售任务 sales target

私人汽车 private cars

大众传媒负面影响 the negative influence of mass media

一次性塑料袋 disposable plastic bags

全球化 globalization

一带一路倡议the Belt and Road Initiative

发挥潜能 fulfill one’s potential

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